Aim
The aim of this week is to re-iterate the shots I worked on, in week 9, of the character suddenly opening his eyes, and waving the fan.
Method
TV Paint
Result
As a result, I redesigned the second shot and made some adjustments to the timing/camera movement of the rest. I’ve also put the shots into the bigger content of the animated scene from my IOL practice.
Discussion
From Nick’s feedback in week 9, because my shots were made of line works mainly, the huge black area of the character’s hair really grabbed the audience’s attention, and the cut from shot 2 of back on the top right of the frame, to shot 3 of black in the middle seemed too sudden. Thus, I redesigned shot 2 and created a hand-drawn camera zooming in and rotating effect in which the black area went from the top right to the middle through in-between frames, to create a better visual rhythm.
I also adjust the timing of the beginning frame, by keeping the character’s eyes closed for longer, I provided more time for the audience to read what’s in the frame.