I was struggling for the way to end the story
really don't want to make it a more and more complex and super long story
so after talking to Christ and got some feedbacks
I redrew the storyboard
instead of showing the whole story from the book and restart, the hand will comes to pick the bear back after 1 scene.
1.
- twins chopped the wood and get toy as reward from adult. while bear got nothing bc he was not willing to do the work>>hand picked him back to the start
- hand chopped the wood for bear and bear got toy reward from adult.
2.
- bear played with his toy happily. twins over there also playing. bunny boy suddenly fell down and broke his toy, bear chose to ignore and left>> hand picked him back to restart.
- hand push him towards the twins. bear felt a bit shy but still took out his toy. but bunny girl still scared of him, she dragged bunny boy up and ran away. bunny boy looked back an saw bear was upset
- >>hand picked the twins back in front of bear. bunny boy looked up and found hand holding tools. bunny boy gave one tool to the girl and gave another one the bear, asked them work together to fix the toy.
- kids made it and felt happy. bear took out his toy and play with them.
-showing illustration of them happily on the book. at the end, hand closed the book>>fin
storyline and draft of storyboard done. I'm planning to develop the storyboard during mid break:)
By Qitong Chen
Email Qitong Chen
Published On: 28/03/2018