This week we were able to get a glimpse feedback on what we needed to improve for Folio 2 based on what we did for Folio 1. Watching Chris and Matt go over some of the works in class, I began to realize what I could have done better with my own work. There were points where I needed to provide more evidence when stating a claim, and I could have also rearranged my paragraphs to different headings so that they fit better. For the next 7 weeks I need to focus on not only fully completing my practice work, but also improving the way I write my paper.
By JeeHoon Oh
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Published On: 12/04/2019
AGI, AGIW07, Professional Research Project, Studio 4, Week 7, PRPW07