I was able to get some helpful feedback from Matt this week. After sharing my draft of the paper, he suggested that I move a lot of the information I had on the “introduction” section and move it to the “background” section instead. He said the Introduction should build interest and be a set up while also establishing the problem. He also suggested I move some of my Related Work into the Background and Introduction. He also gave me some suggestions on new headers I should include. Finally, he told me to focus on how I should present the results from my methodology.
By JeeHoon Oh
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Published On: 06/04/2019
AGI, AGIW05, Professional Research Project, Studio 4, Week 5, PRPW05