Finallyyyyy I finished full story with (nearly done) animations for the final animation.
The background is still draft, and I will have to dim down the color satruration a little to empashize the fox
I've got feedbacks from Uyen, Vita, Jenny and Felix about:
- Try to think about the P.O.V of a human: what is the first thing he saw when he wakes up? His body or the ceiling, or maybe some hand movements?
- The second camera movement on the first scence can be removed because it created false perspective when the fox jumps closer to the scene (right now it looks ike the fox jumps in one place because the camera and the fox are zoomed at the same time and same speed)
- Make sure I clearly animate the transition of the hole and the eyes when the fox tries to close it.
- Should I expand the part where the fox tries hard to close the hole?
- Focus more on the fox's reaction: when he tries to close the hole, and when he disappear (Vita suggested some eyes blinking, Jenny recommended some clearer facial expresion)
And I'm very open to some more feedbacks <3
By Moon Hoang
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Published On: 15/05/2018