Reflection:
During this week, we learned there should be appropriate contradictions in the story to increase the drama of the story.
The inspiration of the story is that a boy wants to have a good dream. The result was that the boy died. The paradox is that the poor boy has few happy memories to support him to have a good dream.
BEASTARS is a good Japanese anime to show the conflicts. Because the protagonist is a wolf and a rabbit. The conflict of characters is perfectly created. The plot of the story also starts from the conflict of the characters themselves.
I knew there should be some curves in stories. It is also what I should strengthen. I will change my story to basic today's knowledge to increase more contradictions and curves.
Story:
“A poor boy wants to have a good dream.”
character: A boy
Dream Makers
Place: Boy's dream
The poor boy sleeping in the garbage. He made a wish on the shining glass that he could have a beautiful dream tonight. Dream makers tried their best to find some happy memory from vast muddy memory balls covered with dust. (Control the character to move forward) As the characters walk, the scene is full of happy things. The little boy saw his parents and delicious dinner, Cold Coca Cola and fragrant bread. The journey is coming to an end, the dream-makers walk to this poor boy and said:" It's time to wake up". The boy looked at the dark door, turned around, and ran into the depths of his dream. Suddenly the dream began to collapse, and all around it fell into darkness. At dawn, the boy in the garbage heap was sleeping forever with tears on his face and a smile.