This week I continued to respond to the Character/Location/Action.
By using mind map, I came up with many different story lines. After having these ideas, I selected the most interesting ones and put them into the story.
Here is the story:
There is a goldfish leaving in a small lake in desert.
Unfortunately, the lake is going to dry up, but he found that there is a bigger, more beautiful and comfortable lake not far away. More fortunately, there is a garbage dump behind the lake, and he found some discarded water balls from it. So he hit them into the air with his strong tail. When the water balls were flying in the air and illuminated by the sun, they exploded. There was a “fish-made” rain! However when the goldfish jumped into the rain, a truck came, and he fell into its carriage. To he surprise, there was a witch living there, and the goldfish fell into her big pot. The witch was so angry that she caught the fish by her crystal ball and threw them out.
This work is similar to the work of Davy Network Technology, whose game I’m a fish Tells the adventure story of a fish.
By examining the movie Modern Times, I reflected that ideas of metaphors and irony of a story. I think it would be better to put some of them in my works, which will make the story more educational and critical.
