Animated Narrative week 8- Yiran Pan s3829794

This week I start thinking about the story, from week 7, I started with the bullet point, and using this point to build the whole story.   

Bullet point 
1.Boy and girl enter the old house,this is their family’s old house. (they are finding something or just play)
2.Something close the door(what)
3.Because of some reason, they can’t leave this house.  
4.they go to the kitchen at first 
5.....

When I thinking with this story, I have two ideas. the first one was the boy and girl meet their grand parents’ ghost(p1-p2). The other one(p3) was about “monster”.and in the end, I decide to use the second one, because I want pay attention to show kid’s fear, and the first point was focus on the family love, this topic was too big for my plan. 

The story: 
In boy and girl’s summer holiday, they come back their hometown, living with aunt. They know their grandparents has an old wooden house, they decide to go there in an afternoon. 
So dark. They can’t see any thing clearly when they enter this house. 
They arrive the kitchen, everything was interesting, some tools they never saw. When they playing the big pots, the boy saw a huge “monster” go through the window. This “monster” look like a wolf, it has picked ear and sharp teeth. so scary, they are trying to escape, but they could see the monster arrived the door. 
The only way was hides. They find a door, then crawl under the bed. They didn’t dare to make any sound. But the voice from monster grew louder and louder. They can hear the breath sound and footsteps. 
Something enter this room. The “monster” will find them. 
When they open the eyes, they see their neighbor’s dog. He looks so happy to found them.