This week, I focus on creating a flow treatment for the story. I want to rework the story I created in draft 1 instead of scrapping everything. I realise that since there’re is no mother-god character anymore, the opening in the dark void is unnecessary. Instead, I started right in the middle of everything, when the samurai and the wizard stance their ground to achieve the cube
This flow treatment will establish the two character’s action on how did they managed to get the cube and who will get it. However, I still need to find a way to implement the story of two siblings into the story of the samurai and wizard.
This treatment helps me to write my script later on. I can use this flow treatment to create a story around it.
