AGI_WorkShopDay3

By Liberatas

Gathering, editing and Finalising snippets of text for app. 

These are some of the snippets of text I am considering using for this instalment of my application. The idea here is to use catchy, short poetic sentences as to not give the audience too much information and therefor allowing the audience to draw their own conclusions about what is ultimately being said, in conjunction with why it is being said in the location that they find it which will hopefully result in them spending more contemplative time in that space, therefor achieving the goal of getting the user to stop, slow down and ‘smell the roses’ so to speak.

I need to have three 'stages' of the story to be represented through this slightly abstracted form of text. 1) The beginning/equilibrium, the troubled state of Daven/Epilepsy Man BEFORE they have learnt to accept and deal with their various ailments. 

2) The “Ah-ha” moment when they learnt to accept and ‘ go with the flow’ which will be represented in the ‘wipe out’ animation

3) And the ending which is all about acceptance and  embracing your weakness as armour.