After collecting feedback from a few people, I've been focusing on adjusting the timing for the animation of the first two paragraphs. Therefore, I've spent most of my time in week eight in adjusting timing.
I animated a few more shots and added them to the video. I've also animated the ending bit, but they can't really show without the textures on them. So, I'll be doing some simple texture to show the subtle changes in the transition of light and post it on MAGI later this week. By the way, the shots in colour are not how they will look like in the final animation. I haven't added proper textures to the characters but I need to get the timing of the mist right. That's why the texture mode is on.
I finally decided on the visuals for paragraph three. Hence, the 6th version of my animatic. Hopefully, it will be the last one.
My focus on week 9 will be to finish finalising the timing for the last two paragraphs and send them to the sound designer. If I, by any chance finish it before the end of week 9, I will start refining the animation shot by shot and adding in the animation of the coconut and the sea.
Animation Timing: https://youtu.be/iy4mRnXjROs
Animatic 6th ver.:https://youtu.be/tJa1M8j99Lg